Thursday, August 19, 2010

Please please help me. im stuck and cant think :[ 10 for best answer!?

llustrate each of your points in part 2 with a sentence that includes specific facts and examples. Must be in 1 complete sentence. My point for my thesis states that





1. the media is a very powerful force when promoting new products or selling a magazine or encouraging people to watch a television show women are shown in an alluring way, behaving with loose morals and participating in scandalous behavior. which influences viewers's values and ideas eventually leading them to think sex sells and thinking just because they have more freedom, rights and equality that they can dress however they like without any consequences.





my thesis is womens fashion and current mode of dress has changed over the years and it's currently fashionable to dress in clothes that reveal a lot of skin. which i believe this manner of dress is greatly influenced by the media and changing social standards.

Please please help me. im stuck and cant think :[ 10 for best answer!?
A concise thesis could be:





Over the past (however many) years, the media and social standards have a had a significant affect on women's fashion.





You should do a HOT Paragraph for your intro (Hook-Outline-Thesis.) So write a first sentence that grabs the reader, then include the information you wrote, and then put in the thesis I gave you at the end. Then you can either write a preview sentence (basically showing what points you'll make in later paragraphs) or start each paragraph explaining how your example relates to the thesis. Good luck! Essays can be tricky!
Reply:You could try doing your OWN homework.


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