MAY anyone HAVE A LOOK AT MY ESSAY AND TELL ME WHERE ARE MY MISTAKES(HONESTLY)?

How an AUBG education will broaden your global perspective and cultivate your capacity for social responsibility?


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There is always the moment in your life where you are in front of the dilemma should you continue fighting for your dreams and ideas or should you leave them and enjoy life the way it is. You realize if you keep going, if you don't give up you may help a lot of people, even change the world. You remind yourself that you have been through all these wearsome wars, not only with the others, but with yourself. You understand that sometimes you were against your desires, against yourself. You are confused, you are not sure if you are going to succeed. When i am in font of such challenge(trial) i tell myself: "I don't think it would be easy, but i am sure it would be worth it!"


Desiding to continue education is a big step in everybody's life. It is an enormous change - you know you have to be careful because chosing a university is like chosing your future home for the next four years. As far as i know, everyone wants to have cozy home with trustworthy family, that can induldge to provide the necessary opportunities. I considered a lot of universities and i dare to say AUBG is the most appropriate and the best "home". I have observed AUBG in the last few years and now I'm sure it provides everything what young people need to prove theirselves. When i came on the open-house week before three years, i was impressed by the traditions AUBG has managed to save through all this time. Since then, I am sure every other college or university should reflects the opportunities AUBG gives. I have always dreamed to study in the AUBG. I am sure that it's experienced teachers and modern material base would help me develop my skills in the mass comunications field. Of course, you can't chose university only because it has the nessecary material base or good hostel - chosing the best university is connected with hard work and realized efforts. Nowdays, the televison is the best informing media, has became a manipulator all over the world. I really want to study journalism, because i want to reflect? people's voice, to show we should be tolerant to each other. There are things we should change for sure - we need to rebuild those parts of society which slacken our pace. I have been working in our local television as a newscaster. This job helped me realize i am a part of the society and i should take an active role(part?) in social life. I have interviewed many people from different parts of our municipality and i understood that there are still a lot of political, economic and social problems because of the wrong information shown by the media. I think there are still people who are afraid to show their critical attitude to the economic affairs and the ups and downs of the international market. I really want to be part of the worldly class of people who work hard to provide everyday knowledge and facts. I also undrestood that i can't build career only on knowledge - career means knowledge acompained by aggregate of clear aims and actions which will lead to my profecional realzation. A successful career for me doesn't mean just an idea for the "perfect life" - it is a process, connected with the accumulation of your intelectual baggage. Finding the best university that saticfies our criterias lay the stronghold of our future career and life. I chose to study journalism in AUBG because i know that this is the profession which would never leave me indifferent to the society that surrounds me and because as every young person I hope and expect, that my future education in AUBG will help me develop parallel to the responsibilities i undertake.

MAY anyone HAVE A LOOK AT MY ESSAY AND TELL ME WHERE ARE MY MISTAKES(HONESTLY)?
there are a lot of spelling mistakes which u can correct by running it thru spell check.but if u expect people in this forum to rephrase or change words it will b difficult.try giving it to friends or family who are good in creative writing to do that.
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Good luck in your future endeavors. You look like a go-getter. I'm sure you will be quite successful!








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Reply:I think if you provide us with an abstraction it would be better.I think they don't read the whole essay if YOU DON'T


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